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Everan 2.0 *HIATUS 10/28/19*

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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Wed Jun 28, 2017 12:47 pm

Name: Everan (2.0)
Likes to go by Eve for short.

Age: Unknown, because of the amnesia and all, looks like a young adult.
(In all actuality his body's around 22 years old.)

Ethnicity: Caucasian.

Allegiance: He's pretty sure he was a good guy in his past life. So he's like a lawful neutral.

Origins: Human.

Equipment:

Appearance:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Personality:

History:

Do you use nanos: Nope

NOTE: For the rp characters and official CN characters that knew my original Everan, this character looks almost exactly like my original Everan. So other characters should react accordingly.


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Post  zerowing21 Wed Jun 28, 2017 1:22 pm

Golden, you do not have to remake Everan you know. You can just edit the orginal when needed to make changes.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Wed Jun 28, 2017 1:57 pm

I know that I don't have to, but I'd still like to.
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Post  zerowing21 Wed Jun 28, 2017 3:34 pm

Nothing can absorb an infinite amount of energy, if one could that would be OP. Please put a limit on it.

If he uses magic, he can only use multiple element if he's a shaman and they can't be high powered spell as well.

If he uses magic, he can not be a speedster nor could he have a incredibly fast healing factor, that would have to be nerfed quiet a bit.

So is it energy manipulation or magic? They're two separate things and godly energy would be sort of overboard.

Also, Keyblades are disney stuff and they should remain there.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Wed Jun 28, 2017 6:16 pm

Okay, I added the changes you mentioned, I feel like it's still not perfect but it's getting there. I'd also like to point out that beforehand I did not look up how fast mach 5 was OH MY GOD I was way off from my initial guess.
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Post  zerowing21 Wed Jun 28, 2017 7:51 pm

you still did not address the power thing.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Wed Jun 28, 2017 8:10 pm

I'm not quite sure what you mean by the power thing, are you talking about whether it's magic or natural and all that? And on side note, I'm keeping the keyblade as a place holder until I can come up with something to serve the purpose of blunt weaponized wand.
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Post  zerowing21 Wed Jun 28, 2017 8:34 pm

You can have your character with magic and being a speedster, that's two different power sets. Drastic power sets too. And unless your character is a shamen, he can't use 3 elements at once.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Sat Jul 01, 2017 1:53 pm

I added a lot of changes, and tried to make somethings clearer about the character.
I forgot to mention one thing about his glove though, I plan to have his level ups, as I'm gonna call them, to be far between. It's most likely that I'll have him go from level 0 to 1 so that he's aware that it's a thing, but not much for awhile.

On a side note, isn't ironic how my revamp of the character immediately needed to get revamped?
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Sat Jul 01, 2017 10:17 pm

Sorry about double posting, but I just wanted to give the heads up that I put in the first draft for his history. Once again, sorry for the double post.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Sat Jul 01, 2017 11:09 pm

Oh my god I can't believe I'm gonna post three times in a row in the same day. So I got a picture.
First off, I'd like to say sorry for the triple posting thing.
Secondly, I want to apologize for the size and quality of the picture. My art program crapped itself earlier today so I did on paper and used my phone to take the picture.
And the I wanna say sorry for the triple post again.

I'll just be waiting for review over here.
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Post  Mr.Didathing Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:03 am

I'd approve, but I think I need an explanation as to why their personality fluctuates so much.
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Post  zerowing21 Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:09 am

He has no solid personality. He needs to have three positives and three negative traits.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:08 pm

Personality has been solidified, I think.
I feel like he's close, but still missing something. LIKE A GOOD PICTURE
What do you think needs touching up, or elaboration?
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Post  Mr.Didathing Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:35 pm

Personally I can't think of anything, so I'll be the first approval.
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Post  zerowing21 Mon Jul 10, 2017 12:07 am

1) The history reads more like something for a fanfic, I'd rather you give us a normal history and not something with dialogue.

2) We did a past event where we went to the powerpunks dimension and we're not doing anything with it again.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:17 am

Alright, I updated history, also I did not know that powerpunk was a one time thing, kinda disappointing.
Also, when you say like a fan fic, is that okay, is it really bad, I'm kinda trying to improve my writing.
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Post  zerowing21 Tue Jul 11, 2017 8:48 am

Well here's the thing, if its for a history of a character in the thread, then its sort of bad. But its good if you wish to post up a story thread in the fan fic section of the site.


The powerpunks stuff was just one event since we had a broader thing going on there. Using them once was all we could get away with.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Tue Jul 11, 2017 12:57 pm

Ooooohhh, gotcha, thanks for explaining it all.
Well now that that's all cleared up, do you see anything else that needs workshopping?
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Post  zerowing21 Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:26 pm

I'd like a bit more detail on the history in the late half.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:54 pm

Detail has been added!
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Post  zerowing21 Tue Jul 11, 2017 2:32 pm

How did he rid himself of his abilities.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Tue Jul 11, 2017 2:43 pm

Magic, I guess? I didn't really think it important enough to make a point out of it. I'm now realizing that was a mistake.
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Post  zerowing21 Tue Jul 11, 2017 3:46 pm

It's one of those points that needs to have a reasoning since it makes little sense
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 Tue Jul 11, 2017 5:21 pm

I think I got it this time, and just to be safe I added some more to the end.
Do you think some things are still left too unexplained?
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