Zeytran, the Teen-Demon

Well he wanted to even learn about it, but his fam was like "boi no just do what we say" and he refused. He was disowned.

I don't see why he'd be emotional about it. He was happy he was good at Sound, but he found out he's even better with Ice. That's his thing, he discovered he was even better than he thought he could.

Hmm, the rampage could've partially been a little confusion sprinkled in. I think I want him to kill his dad at some point..he'd probably find it amusing.

He lost his family because he picked Sound over the other two. Losing your family isn't a small matter. I don't think anyone would easily ditch the thing that made their family separate because then they would look like they don't even stand up for what they believed in.

It's not huge to Zeytran, not really. He bottled it all up. He's not thinking like us, but not like normal demons either.

I'm not even talking about hatred for his family or anything. He's prideful isn't he? A prideful person doesn't just abandon something they got in an argument over easily.

Even if he bottled it up, there will come a point where he can't keep it in anymore. Not even Dracula in Grim could keep stuff in for that long. (thinks about Van Helsing episode) And as shadow said about the prideful thing, if he is so, then you have to add that into personality.

He's far more arrogant than the original Zeytran, who was pretty dang humble. He's still not uber arrogant. Also, he was taking his frustration out during the murder spree, which is a good example.

Notus didn't like humans much, Zeytran was stressed and upset, so he figured to do what Notus nonchalantly commented on doing every few while, killing a few humans.

Prideful and arrogance are two different things young.

No, they really aren't.
Prideful:
Noun
a high or inordinate opinion of one's own dignity, importance, merit, or superiority, whether as cherished in the mind or as displayed in bearing, conduct, etc.

adjective
1.making claims or pretensions to superior importance or rights; overbearingly assuming; insolently proud:
an arrogant public official.
2.characterized by or proceeding from arrogance, or a sense of superiority, self-importance, or entitlement:
arrogant claims.

Practically synonymous. Besides, I already have his pride in his profile.

Alright, you're right. Did you make the changes that were requested.

I believe so, but a lot of stuff irl has happened recently so I have have missed it.

A Heart of Stone, a Body of Cold be an insta kill if the target is frozen?

It could probably insta-kill rodents and small animals. On a person I think they'd just be really cold and potentially get frostbite or hypothermia if not warmed soon. Typical applications.

I'd denote that so no one gets confused.

Done. That ability could kill, but not instantly.

I'll give you a tentative approval, but I will be look back at this.

Got it

SHould the summoning ritual work the first time or should it be around the second or third?

I would just say it doesn't work at all. And he shows up on his own accord without it.

Are you sure? Cause the Ritual thing is to make Zeytran just pop in and have a conversation with Sylvia quickly

(Can they have a telepathic link, btw, or nah?)

yeah I'm sure and no to the link.

Sylvia will still attempt it, but it'll fail then.

alright, now to wait for another approve.

and to triple check, the summoning isn't allowed?

(tbf you said it could've earlier but minds change, I get that)

As said, very good chance the ritual will fail as was said in PM.

A good chance. But that still leaves a chance.

The percentage of failure is present, but Sylvia knows at the least, a partial amount of what she's doing.

youngjusticeforever wrote:Age: 2,000 (mentally 10-16, fluctuates)

Mentally a child or teen would work in here. It's kind of impossible to fluctuate in age.

youngjusticeforever wrote:A few years later, Zeytran encountered his first fusions. Zeytran didn't know much about fusions and initially thought they were cool, till they started attacking him. That's when he was dismayed to learn that his bard powers didn't affect Fusions, as their fusion matter was capable of resisting it. So he froze them to death, the ice encasing them, which he then shattered, killing the fusions.

After killing the fusions, Zeytran proceeded to leave to the Underworld.

No he didn't. Fusion don't exist in the Underworld.