Mari Clark (Hiatus)

Character Profile
Mari Clark

Age: 15
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Allegiance: Good Guys
Origins: Human
Weapons: A whip with a grappling hook head for the top and it can roll up if you press a button on the bottom of the handle.
Appearance:

Straight blonde hair and her eyes are dark brown. Skinny and just regular height. Normally wears t-shirts, saying random things, often about running. She Wears a golden colored jacket. Wears blue jeans and black shoes with green lining.
Strengths: She is great with long-range weapons, has excellent hand eye coordination from playing video games and is really fast for a normal human, since she practices track and cross country daily.
Weaknesses: Is so afraid of heights, that even the mention of a plane freaks her out. She is highly allergic to nuts and will stop breathing if one enters her mouth, she is also really bad when it comes to hand-to-hand combat.
Personality: Turns red whenever someone she likes is even in the same building as her. Can be really sassy and doesn't like it when people offer to help her fight. Doesn't make friends easily. Loves showing off. Likes helping others. She'll get mad at you for correcting you. Hates it when people are talking when she wants to. Likes swimming when she gets the chance.
History: She came from a rich family because her dad worked in a company devoted to building weapons for the war and sending them to Dexter. She had many friends when she was young, but soon ditched them all because she figured out they only liked her for her money. Earned straight A's throughout the next few years. Decided it might be time for another friend and made one who eventually stole all her money from her purse. Has tried even harder not to make friends with anyone unless she absolutely trusts them. Got involved in the war to help defeat Lord Fuse by starting to take up biology and heal the wounded.
Do you use Nanos? Yes

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(This is just stuff for me, that I'd like to keep with the sheet. The sample text is for if I stop roleplaying for a while and want to start back up I'll have a slight idea of how I used this character, and I like to use music to get me into the mood for stuff.)

Sample Text: "Sorry, if you wanted to be friends, that probably won't happen," she says looking blankly into the other's eyes.
Normal Theme: (Not found.)
Battle Theme: (Not found.)

I think this is my best first try on an OC

Zeke is now on Hiatus and thanks for telling me what to fix   

Looks passable to me, so I'll accept.

Added

I'll give a tentative approve on this.

I approve.