Samuel Serafino
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Re: Samuel Serafino
Ok, thanks!
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Re: Samuel Serafino
I was reading the "required readings" again, and I saw the timeline. So, I edited my character's history to fit the timeline, along with some tweaks to grammar and readability and structure. Should be better than it was before now
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Re: Samuel Serafino
Alright, made some more changes, I added "inventory" (to help myself remember what I have) and a spoiler containing the secrets to some of his history.
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Re: Samuel Serafino
I feel weird, documenting my changes like this...
A question-are we allowed to have relative OC's?
A question-are we allowed to have relative OC's?
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Re: Samuel Serafino
zerowing21 wrote:Alligence can't really be undecided.
Just put neutral.
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After reviewing the posts, your OC was accepted after Techee since you had: Amp's, mine, and techee's approvals.
So he's good to go. Just fix allegiance and begin in the rp.
Re: Samuel Serafino
Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:zerowing21 wrote:Alligence can't really be undecided.
Just put neutral.
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After reviewing the posts, your OC was accepted after Techee since you had: Amp's, mine, and techee's approvals.
So he's good to go. Just fix allegiance and begin in the rp.
Sorry, your earlier post was a little hard to...understand...I didn't realize "fix that up and I'll accept it" meant what it...meant. Anyway YAY I HAVE 3 APPROVALS!
Time to begin...
EDIT: Urm...I can't post stuff...you forgot to give me access to post in the Open World?
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Re: Samuel Serafino
Well, that WAS why I thought I wasn't accepted yet.Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:Sorry about that. You'll be able to post now.
Thanks though.
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Re: Samuel Serafino
Alright, he has been updated to reveal some more shiz about him.....(He has a double personality?! and also why he has amnesia)
Zero says I need a re-approval, so here it is.
Zero says I need a re-approval, so here it is.
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Re: Samuel Serafino
Where did this dissociative identity disorder come from? This is a big stretch to have, especially so late in the game when he never had a reason for it in the first place. On top of that, you can't gain DID just by messing around in the brain; if you could, neuropsychologists would have already learned how to "fix" DID. DID is a psychological disorder; he has to experience a trauma.
Re: Samuel Serafino
BUT THAT WAS THE FIRST DRAFT!
AND THE SECOND DRAFT...will never happen.
*Walks away in shame*
AND THE SECOND DRAFT...will never happen.
*Walks away in shame*
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