Re: Reynard "Ray" (Hiatus)

xxPsyapane10xx Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:39 am

zerowing21 wrote:Maybe it was someone who was hunting foxes and the person trying to grab at him caused the little guy so much stress that it turned the nanites on and he can talk.

Fixed it

**Kaiser** Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:56 am

Going back a bit, Ray gained his abnormal abilities randomly one day through the nanites in him activating. It happened when a hunter was looking for foxes and after finding him, it scared him so much that he began to plead in english trying to make him let him go. It scared the ba-jeebies out of the hunter and he ran away yelling.

What happened in between then and his search for Fusions? Like, did he try to figure out why he suddenly started talking? What was his reaction to this surely dramatic revelation that he could speak English now? It seems like a big jump to go from normal animal to suddenly searching for Fusions. What peaked his interest in fusions in the first place?

xxPsyapane10xx Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:03 am

Kaiser wrote:
Going back a bit, Ray gained his abnormal abilities randomly one day through the nanites in him activating. It happened when a hunter was looking for foxes and after finding him, it scared him so much that he began to plead in english trying to make him let him go. It scared the ba-jeebies out of the hunter and he ran away yelling.
What happened in between then and his search for Fusions? Like, did he try to figure out why he suddenly started talking? What was his reaction to this surely dramatic revelation that he could speak English now? ~~It seems like a big jump to go from normal animal to suddenly searching for Fusions. What peaked his interest in fusions in the first place?~~

Fixing, but as I think I said, he's just interested in adventure and that was something that didn't seem like it was ending anytime soon. What happened in between? More trying to find something to do, I'll try to add this in if it isn't there (most likely isn't if you pointed it out) He has questioned how he can talk, but it opens up more options to find adventure, so he doesn't try to figure it out much. Striked out what I believe is already done. I'll fix in the morning. Well, later in the morning. It's 2:03 AM right now, lol

**Buttercrush** Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:44 pm

I'd like to see the history expanded on a lot more than it is. For example, how would a fox that African, (which I'm sure foxes aren't native to Africa but hur dur RP World,) get to America, where the RP takes place?

I'd also like to see more on how other foxes and such reacted to Ray when his nanites activated. Was he able to continue to live as a normal fox?

xxPsyapane10xx Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:25 pm

Professor Utonium wrote:I'd like to see the history expanded on a lot more than it is. For example, how would a fox that African, (which I'm sure foxes aren't native to Africa but hur dur RP World,) get to America, where the RP takes place?

I'd also like to see more on how other foxes and such reacted to Ray when his nanites activated. Was he able to continue to live as a normal fox?

Fennec Foxes are native to Africa, but let me see what I can think of for how it got to to America. The last question "Was he able to continue to live as a normal fox?" would have the answer as no. He, as stated in the history I believe, enjoys adventuring around and looking for Fusions and such. I have not yet seen a fox do this, lol. Other fixes will be coming in soon with Kaisers fixes.

xxPsyapane10xx Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:09 am

I have fixed some, though I am guessing you have more for me to fix, so shoot.

**Kaiser** Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:19 am

xxPsyapane10xx wrote:I have fixed some, though I am guessing you have more for me to fix, so shoot.

You don't need to make that assumption. He might be ready now :/

And you know what, I think he is. I'll give him a pass.

xxPsyapane10xx Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:23 am

Kaiser wrote:
xxPsyapane10xx wrote:I have fixed some, though I am guessing you have more for me to fix, so shoot.
You don't need to make that assumption. He might be ready now :/

And you know what, I think he is. I'll give him a pass.

Who's mah buddy?

**Kyra_Xyrespace** Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:56 am

I'll give an approval.

xxPsyapane10xx Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:57 am

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:I'll give an approval.

Danke

**zerowing21** Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:20 am

*stamps approved on his forehead*

xxPsyapane10xx Mon Sep 07, 2015 2:08 pm

zerowing21 wrote:*stamps approved on his forehead*

thanks

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