Jessica "May" wish

Name:Jessica May wish
Age:12
Ethnicity:African American
Allegiance:heroes
Race: Human/Anodite mix
Origin:1/4th anodite
Powers:Mana based 

• Mana bolt:two blasts of mana combined into one (low)
  
• Magical defense: A forcefield is formed to block attacks(medium protects up to 5 people capable of blocking low attacks)
  
• Anodite Attack: Jessica draws forth an explosive blast(Hard)
  

Appearance:Jessica wears a black t-shirt with magenta sleeves a white crescent moon Is on the shirt with magenta spots in certain areas she wears a purple plaid skirt with leggings and black sneakers with two bracelets on her left hand both black he has blonde hair straight with bangs
Personality:Jessica is upbeat kind and a lovely person to have around she finds fun in most activities though she hates cheating and lying , she has a liking for sugar and the color purple ,Jessca has a large dislike for villains and a Strong sense of justice , she doesn't really like being judged , Jessica always sees to the bright side..though inside she's still hurt by her mother and doesn't like being reminded of it as  a child she was told to be generous by her father her over protective personality comes from the fact she doesn't want to make sure they ever get killed in battle , Jessica has tried to make friends usually because nobody wanted her as a friend she seems needy and mostly tries to hard despite being good at parkour she has some valor (Apart of protecting her allies) to back herself up in battle she doesn't like flirting a

Strengths:parkour , agile , Bravery
Weaknesses: , doesn't do well with  melee , still in training not good at math, cat allergies , not physically strong
History:Jessica was born in bellwood her father was a working man , her mother a descendent of an anodite that controls mana , in bellwood she had very interactions with any people due to her powers which her father had kept a secret,  during her father's work a To'kustar (eventually stopped by Ben) had destroyed the city her father killed by  the colossal thing later at her birthday where she had been given great powers because of "The spark" she would decide to continue trying to see more about these abilities , her powers had activated unknowingly when she was in danger while crossing the road she had stopped a car with a forcefield and immediately left the area leaving the driver with a broken neck , when she arrived home she had been shocked to see her mother gone..but it was during theese days she'd live with her grandmother who'd teach her new abilities since she wanted to learn them.

Do you use nano's:No

Yes, some powers would be best to listed.

Her personality needs more to it. Please add more positive and negative traits to balance her out.

zerowing21 wrote:Yes, some powers would be best to listed.

Her personality needs more to it. Please add more positive and negative traits to balance her out.

 By positive and negative traits did you mean strength / weaknesses?

No I do not, I mean personality traits.

zerowing21 wrote:No I do not, I mean personality traits.

Anything else I need to add? Also do I just go anywhere?

Please label if the power is medium, low or high power.

How is protective of others in danger a strength? Please elaborate.

Liking Parkour should be just Parkour.

Generous is a personality trait, if you say how she is generous for the strength it could work.

You do not have to add her likes into her personality at all. You really need to go into details on some of these bits you selected for personality.

zerowing21 wrote:Please label if the power is medium, low or high power.

How is protective of others in danger a strength? Please elaborate.

Liking Parkour should be just Parkour.

Generous is a personality trait, if you say how she is generous for the strength it could work.

You do not have to add her likes into her personality at all. You really need to go into details on some of these bits you selected for personality.

Do you have any suggestions  for strengths and weaknesses alongside how many?

Guess I'll just wait for responses?

you need a 3 of each minimum, but you can have 3 of one and 4 of the other. as for suggestions, I can't think of any off the top of my head. Kyra will be reviewing your character tomorrow.

zerowing21 wrote:you need a 3 of each minimum, but you can have 3 of one and 4 of the other. as for suggestions, I can't think of any off  the top of my head. Kyra will be reviewing your character tomorrow.

Okay....

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:

superxander10 wrote:

• Magical defense: A forcefield is formed to block attacks(medium)
  

What attack level can it defend against? How many people can be protected by the force field? How long can it stay active?

Personality:.........Won't take kindly to insults , 

Was there more to this?

Strengths:.... addition, .... Bravery(Personality trait or strength?)

Addition? How would this be a strength?

I'm borderline on bravery being a strength or personality since courage can be considered a strength to a person's character. For now, I will allow it.

Why did you remove the Nano section?

Fixed it...so that's one vote tor me..

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:I haven't given an approval on the character.

Oh Kay.

Maybe you should change not good in other form of math to just being bad at math in general.

zerowing21 wrote:Maybe you should change not good in other form of math to just being bad at math in general.

Changed sorry I haven't noticed this in a while

I'm gonna get rid of this character and remake her now.

Want me to delete this thread so you can make a new thread?

zerowing21 wrote:Want me to delete this thread so you can make a new thread?

Go ahead! I'll make another one.