OC: Charcoal Óneiro

Name: Charcoal 'Darkus' Óneiro
Age: 200+ ((Earth years is appox. 21))
Race: Alien ((Kapnós plásma; Smoke Creature in Greek))
Allegiance: Neutral
Origins: Alien

Powers:
Gasping Shadows: When he smokes, shadows imitate a smokescreen effect. If he smokes more, the smokescreen is enough to cover the room then fade out. The smokescreen effect is blinding and coughing(hallucinations). Enemies in the room are stunned, allowing him to get away. If he creates small puffs into an individual, it causes them to cough. This will blind them for split second. Low to Medium

Flicker: An attack provided by his tail or feet. If an individual comes in contact by either or will result in a stinging pain. The pain is first degree burning; causing the opponent to be stun. Stunning only lasts around 2 to 5 seconds. Low

Haze Recreate: Manipulating haze into animals and objects. Objects can range up to anything small, or chair size. While animals are can be anything he seen. These have to be in his range and is limited to his cig wand. Less smoke creates small things, more smoke creates bigger or larger things. Medium to High

Smoke Jump: Using just an ounce of smoke, he's able to to double jump to high ledges. Low

Regeneration: Only can regen tail/legs/arms or minor wounds. Regen process could take 1 to 2 hours or rather days. Hours could mean he has enough smoke nearby to recover. But taken in ounces, days could mean only his cig is supplying him which is limited. Low

Appearance:

Charcoal Ref Image:

He's 5'4, wears a small red kerchief; and carries around charcoal cig in his mouth. This cig can also be used as wand, to perform his abilities at work. Some things to take into thought though. While his body appears to be more raptor like; Charcoal's tail is long and similar to a gecko. As for his ""ears"" these are compare to Charizard's horns. When a character interacts with Charcoal's skin; its smooth, wet to the touch. As it leaves off a shadowy essence after being poke at.


Strengths:
- Has mild agility, can move quickly...
- Natural awareness of animals, means knowing how they work and what they do, even if they're the deadliest.
- Mild intelligence, fascinated by humans and quick thinking.
Weaknesses:
- Anything, such as air, that can instantly destroy his supply of smoke.
- Fears of spiders, anything creeps in the darkness and doesn't know what it is.
- Struggles the grasp of long thinking, often assumes and mistakes, gets awkward which makes him feel trouble of others.

Personality:
Clumsy, yet gentle. That sense of awkwardness you get from him, when you stand next to someone who looks naked.. You'll get this impression he's a clever trickster, but he's actually a huge sassy nerd. Charcoal is super judgmental by just about everything. He doesn't say it usually, but a specific face will be given to prove it. For being so judgmental, he'll know something is wrong. And would like to help as much as he can, even if he has no idea what you're talking about.

History:
Born and raise on planet just beyond earth and planet fuse itself. The planet is called, Kielder-A, located in Trankor System, which is a barren-wasteland planet with no levels of oxygen. The life is mostly all underground. That have large, open-caves that share life with other species native to Charcoal's Race. The wasteland above holds one colonize city, for trading travelers and universal news for other alien races. The planet has 3 moons, and appears much larger than Earth but smaller than Planet Fuse. The life Underground shares unknown light sources, and creates dim-like atmosphere for many species, mostly plants. A large city of Kapnós plásma live there, and have made own for many shared species, which is called Morahi.
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Charcoal has recently heard on universal news that a Planet of  Fuse was on the move once again. He heard before that such a planet as this would stop at some point but never the less it gobble up some poor alien species out there. It has fascinated the smoke boy as he grew up of other alien lifeforms before outside his system. Charcoal was always bully as a smokling, he saw things and was mocked for his clumsiness. Which made him awkward around others when growing up, and has problems adjusting now to his kind. So he saved up his units of money, brought a shuttle where he could study what he loved. He was largely interested in humans, and he knew the perfect place to study them. He set up his shuttle, traveling across space but being careful of Planet Fuse he jump-drive to Earth. That's when something malfunctionin his engine, and his ship came crashing down in Pimpleback Mountains. This is where currently lingers at. He figures he was stuck here he continue his study, trying to understand not only humans but the fusion monsters that linger on the Earth now as well. Luckily his ship crashed, landing over by crystals and caves, where he set up his base of operations, called home. His engine has been fix since, and he continues to study in hope to clean up the mess.

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How exactly is liking cute animals a strength?

zerowing21 wrote:How exactly is liking cute animals a strength?

I have no idea. Lemme fix that.

ok so a natural understanding. Does that mean he knows pretty much all about their instincts and what drives them?

zerowing21 wrote:ok so a natural understanding. Does that mean he knows pretty much all about their instincts and what drives them?

Pretty much that saying, he's aware what makes them tick.

The please add that in rainy.

zerowing21 wrote:The please add that in rainy.

Um. Done.

How long is someone stunned due to flicker?

I can't see much else wrong with him, I'll give him a tentative approval.

I liiiiiiiike it. Approved by me.

Yaaaaaaaay

Bumped.

Updated. Fill free to look over!

maybe its me, but I think maybe he needs one more negative and positive personality trait?

zerowing21 wrote:maybe its me, but I think maybe he needs one more negative and positive personality trait?

I'm going to disagree on this; because I do not want to add some extra minuscule trait on there. Then just absolutely forget/not use whatsoever during rp'ing. I could update his strength and weaknesses since his new update feels out of place of those compare to rest.

As i said it's probably just me with how i'm reading it and totally not getting it. The strengths and weaknesses are fine to me. I'll give an approval since everything should be fine.

zerowing21 wrote:As i said it's probably just me with how i'm reading it and totally not getting it. The strengths and weaknesses are fine to me. I'll give an approval since everything should be fine.

Thanks!

I'll also give an approval!

Lesamuen wrote:There's quite a few inconspicuous typos sprinkled across, but that's understandable since this character's a bit old. I'll be your 3rd approval.

Thank you!! ^^ I may go back into and fix the typos on the sly.