Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
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Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
xxPsyapane10xx Thu Jul 03, 2014 1:50 am
Name:
Sachi Kaneko
Age:
15
Ethnicity:
2/3 Japanese, 1/3 American
Race:
Human
Allegiance:
Good Guys
Origins:
Magic User
Powers:
Healing - She can heal her friends, depending on how harsh of a wound it is (Medium)
Appearance:
She has red hair that runs down to her back. She has green eyes and a really light tan skin. She is skinny and a little short. She wears a necklace with a cross and silver bracelets. She wears a black, collared shirt and a red skirt that goes around down to her knees. She does tend to wear more casual clothes though.
Strengths:
- She can heal three people at a time for up to five minutes, depending on the wound.
- She is always reliable no matter where she is or what she's doing.
- She can swim really well
Weaknesses:
- Because of her generosity she can, but chooses not to stop healing someone until they are completely healed, making her a target.
- She is allergic to potatoes, to the point where she would stop breathing.
- She has a horrible fear of heights.
Personality:
She loves hanging around people and any living things for that matter. She hates seeing people get hurt and if she has to she might waste all her energy on them. She absolutely loves games like bowling, soccer and etc. She feels as if the harder the challenge the less she can do to help heal the person or people. She loves singing and works hard at it when she isn't helping others. She hates it when people get into fights and might get in the middle of the people so nobody gets hurt. She hates it when people stare at her, even for 5 seconds. She doesn't get ticked off a lot, but when she does you will regret it. She gets mad when she sees people being lazy and not being active. She also gets mad when people hurt themselves in stupid ways.
History:
When she was born she had brown eyes and she was enclosed in her house. She had a 1 year old brother then, who would be 16 now. She went to school and one day when she came home her mom was on the ground groaning. Her brother quickly called her father. That is when she unlocked her powers and she healed her mother. The next day her mother died because she wasn't strong enough to fully heal her. During the funeral she sat down crying and didn't have the courage to get up and speak no matter how many times her father asked, but her brother did so instead. She helped the nurse in healing others during school from then on. She has been training to become a nurse and has memorized a lot, but when it comes to seeing fusions, she'd rather just heal on the sidelines.
Do you use Nanos:
No
Sachi Kaneko
Age:
15
Ethnicity:
2/3 Japanese, 1/3 American
Race:
Human
Allegiance:
Good Guys
Origins:
Magic User
Powers:
Healing - She can heal her friends, depending on how harsh of a wound it is (Medium)
Appearance:
She has red hair that runs down to her back. She has green eyes and a really light tan skin. She is skinny and a little short. She wears a necklace with a cross and silver bracelets. She wears a black, collared shirt and a red skirt that goes around down to her knees. She does tend to wear more casual clothes though.
- Headshot:
Strengths:
- She can heal three people at a time for up to five minutes, depending on the wound.
- She is always reliable no matter where she is or what she's doing.
- She can swim really well
Weaknesses:
- Because of her generosity she can, but chooses not to stop healing someone until they are completely healed, making her a target.
- She is allergic to potatoes, to the point where she would stop breathing.
- She has a horrible fear of heights.
Personality:
She loves hanging around people and any living things for that matter. She hates seeing people get hurt and if she has to she might waste all her energy on them. She absolutely loves games like bowling, soccer and etc. She feels as if the harder the challenge the less she can do to help heal the person or people. She loves singing and works hard at it when she isn't helping others. She hates it when people get into fights and might get in the middle of the people so nobody gets hurt. She hates it when people stare at her, even for 5 seconds. She doesn't get ticked off a lot, but when she does you will regret it. She gets mad when she sees people being lazy and not being active. She also gets mad when people hurt themselves in stupid ways.
History:
When she was born she had brown eyes and she was enclosed in her house. She had a 1 year old brother then, who would be 16 now. She went to school and one day when she came home her mom was on the ground groaning. Her brother quickly called her father. That is when she unlocked her powers and she healed her mother. The next day her mother died because she wasn't strong enough to fully heal her. During the funeral she sat down crying and didn't have the courage to get up and speak no matter how many times her father asked, but her brother did so instead. She helped the nurse in healing others during school from then on. She has been training to become a nurse and has memorized a lot, but when it comes to seeing fusions, she'd rather just heal on the sidelines.
Do you use Nanos:
No
Last edited by xxPsyapane10xx on Sat Mar 31, 2018 11:08 am; edited 14 times in total
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Re: Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
zerowing21 Thu Jul 03, 2014 7:04 pm
She wouldn't be able to use nanos at all anyway.
ok now for my thing. The first strength, cut it. I don't see being able to heal ones self like that. That shouldn't even be allowed.
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ok now for my thing. The first strength, cut it. I don't see being able to heal ones self like that. That shouldn't even be allowed.
ADD MORE VICES!
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Re: Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
zerowing21 Mon Jul 14, 2014 1:49 pm
She shouldn't be able to heal herself at all with her powers. That would make her pretty much unwoundable.
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Re: Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
zerowing21 Mon Jul 14, 2014 3:06 pm
Strengths one and two are kind of the same and It feels like there isn't enough history to go on. Why did she get involved with the war. Does magic run in the family etc.
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Re: Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
Kyra_Xyrespace Tue Jul 15, 2014 1:28 am
xxPsyapane10xx wrote:Strengths:
- She can heal people quite a bit before getting tired.
- She can help her friends when in need.
For the first, reword it a little. Perhaps change it to: can heal three people at a time for up to five minutes. As it stands, it sounds more like what her power can do instead of her strength.
For the second, that's more of a personality trait than an actual strength, unless you mean she's reliable, in which case, that's acceptable. Maybe even change it to: always reliable no matter where she is or what she's doing.
Weaknesses:
- She doesn't like watching people get hurt, so she will usually heal them and waste her energy.
- She is allergic to potatoes.
For the first one, it sounds like a personality trait more than a weakness. Maybe reword it so it goes something like: because of her generous heart, she has no self-preservation and uses up her energy which can make her a target
For the other, is she deathly allergic? Like, if Rolf shoved a potato in her face she'd die? Or just sneezing allergic?
History:
- Spoiler:
Is she involved with the war? Does she fight fusions? Does she avoid fusions?
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Re: Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
xxPsyapane10xx Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:04 pm
Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:xxPsyapane10xx wrote:Strengths:
- She can heal people quite a bit before getting tired.
- She can help her friends when in need.
For the first, reword it a little. Perhaps change it to: can heal three people at a time for up to five minutes. As it stands, it sounds more like what her power can do instead of her strength.
For the second, that's more of a personality trait than an actual strength, unless you mean she's reliable, in which case, that's acceptable. Maybe even change it to: always reliable no matter where she is or what she's doing.Weaknesses:
- She doesn't like watching people get hurt, so she will usually heal them and waste her energy.
- She is allergic to potatoes.
For the first one, it sounds like a personality trait more than a weakness. Maybe reword it so it goes something like: because of her generous heart, she has no self-preservation and uses up her energy which can make her a target
For the other, is she deathly allergic? Like, if Rolf shoved a potato in her face she'd die? Or just sneezing allergic?History:
- Spoiler:
Is she involved with the war? Does she fight fusions? Does she avoid fusions?
Fixed I think
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Re: Sachi Kaneko (Defunct)
Mr.Didathing Sun Feb 15, 2015 7:17 pm
I feel pretty good about it. Accepted from moi.
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