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Post  Decade Fri Jun 01, 2018 11:33 pm

Name: Tsukiya Tenobushi
In costume is known as Kamen Rider, Kamen Rider Resistance, or Resistance.

Age: 23

Ethnicity: Asian-American

Race: Human

Allegiance: Good

Powers: Due to him being human, he doesn’t have powers. However, he does have the code-driver, a special waist mounted tool that works by the use of special cards used to grant him abilities and armours. While it may look inconvenient an clucky, it’s quite easy to carry around since the belt compacts into it and only comes out when place against someone’s waist.
While the code-driver itself is technological, the cards themselves are a mystery to him. His current theory is that they're of a magical origin due to something I'll explain in a moment.
The driver has a simple function, by pulling on the sides of the buckle, it opens by the center piece spins to put the card slot on the top. When a card is placed into it it announces the type of card and then the specific card once the driver is closed again. It announces the attacks with an echoey, deep, robotic voice.
His cards are split into 4 different varieties:
Kamen Ride Cards:
Attack Ride Cards:
Final attack ride:
Final Kamen Ride Card:

Appearance:

Strengths:
1. His arrogance can tend to rile people up, often times getting people to say more than they intended to. This helps him get information when he's looking for it or even skip some of the trivialities of socialising.
2.He’s a talented photographer (when he remembers to change film rolls…).
3. He’s a jack of all house hold trades, raised to be diligent and self sufficient, he's a good chef and great at making a place look good.

Weaknesses:
1. He acts stand-offish and tends to push people away, leading to him looking like a jerk and just feeling lonely most of the time.
2. He’s obsessive about photography. He has a dedicated portion of his already small apartment into being a black room and has actually questioned doing the right thing if it would damage his camera.
3. He’s a bit impish and has a childish side to him, meaning that he likes to annoy people for fun sometimes. Thus has led to him being a bother for both friend and foe.

Personality: Tsukiya’s pretty much a large child, an angsty, sassy child. Granted, he does have a proper level of maturity, it's just that he can tend to hold grudges and be prejudicial. He has an air of arrogance to him and sometimes acts like he's better than everyone else. But even though he acts like that on the outside, on the inside he's a sweetheart (but he'll never admit it).
He has a leniency towards helping people and following his idea of good, but he usually makes excuses for it. Two of his favorite excuses are “It would have just been a bother if you got hurt" and "I was just passing through."
A long with that, he has a dream to capture the world in his camera. So his harder outer personality is related to the fact that, despite his efforts, his pictures don't come out clearly, to him it’s as though the world hasn't accepted him.
The best course of action with him is to either put up with his remarks and self confidence until you warm up to him, or pester him enough until he puts up with you. If you do put the time into getting to know him, you'll have a friend who'll be loyal until the end.
On a side note, he's not surprised by much and is a little too used to the more insane parts of the world.

History:

Do you use nanos: They don't work after he's transformed so he hasn't invested time into finding any he could use.


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Post  zerowing21 Sat Jun 02, 2018 2:03 pm

While you are still needing to work on it, i'll go into a few things i see.

You're going to have to explain why being a jack of all trades is a strength, but to me if this is a strength, the master of none, can't not be a weakness. We'll see how the other mods feel on it.

Explain how he is able to get those villains trust him and what not. Since he is someone who is good with photography, why not make that a strength?
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Post  Decade Sat Jun 02, 2018 8:11 pm

I added some of those changes you mentioned, Zero, and a bit more. The suit designs aren't a hundred percent yet, but hopefully this is enough to go off for now.
I hope it's to you're liking!
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Post  zerowing21 Sun Jun 03, 2018 6:02 pm

I do have to ask, are the suits and change on them heavily inspired by the kamen rider series?
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Post  Decade Tue Jun 05, 2018 7:56 am

Yeah, they are! I added the pictures to appearance if you wanna look at them.
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Post  zerowing21 Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:19 pm

oh you got done the history, can you please tell us when you do updates to your OC please?
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Post  Decade Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:27 pm

Oh yeah, of course! Sorry about that! XP
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Post  zerowing21 Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:35 pm

now how is being impish in his childish and playful nature a weakness? Explain please and there is nothing in the history to indicate this kind of thing either.
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Post  Decade Sun Jun 10, 2018 2:11 pm

I added why it was a weakness and integrated into his background.
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Post  zerowing21 Sun Jun 10, 2018 2:36 pm

alright, next, how is him being jaded by the world affect his mind set as whole and how does it cause it to be a weakness? Seeing the heroes grow up and nothing surprises him doesn't exactly jive with being jaded.
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Post  Decade Sun Jun 10, 2018 3:55 pm

The more I thought about it, that wasn't really a weakness, so I stuck it the end of personality and added a new weakness Surprised
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Post  Mr.Didathing Sun Jun 24, 2018 10:40 pm

I like this guy. I'll be first approval.
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Post  Buttercrush Sat Jul 07, 2018 5:38 pm

I don't know anything about the Kamen Rider series, but how is your character and their abilities your own? Or is it essentially a copy-paste from the series?
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Post  Decade Sun Jul 08, 2018 12:05 pm

Oh nonono, I don't want to make him seem copy pasted! He's supposed be an homage that can fit into the story of the role play.
So to answer your question, Tsukiya's origins are all original, but the powers and the designs of his other forms are based on official riders.
And on the topic of those powers, on a more explained level I've kept each form to a more specific gimmick than the rider they were based off of. So while the riders they're based off are meant to function on their own, I took the base ideas of each and made them so that they would function to give a varied group of options on how to handle each situation, while still making sure to keep the themes of each one.

( Embarassed I hope that's not too long and rambley! I just want to get the point across.)
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Post  zerowing21 Thu Jul 19, 2018 7:34 pm

Even as an homage to the shows, you can take influence from it, but forms and designs should not be purely from it. Mix things up so the influence is there, but there is a bit of your own thing to it as well.
(hope this makes sense in some way)
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Post  Decade Thu Jul 19, 2018 8:11 pm

zerowing21 wrote:Even as an homage to the shows, you can take influence from it, but forms and designs should not be purely from it. Mix things up so the influence is there, but there is a bit of your own thing to it as well.
(hope this makes sense in some way)

Actually, I get it! I'm gonna need a bit of time to come up with the designs, but I'm sure I can do it! I'll update it as soon as I have something to show.
But beyond the designs, is there anything else that sticks out?
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Post  zerowing21 Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:12 am

I think that was the major point of contention. I'll let you know if there is other stuff.
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