Sky aka Skylarren REMAKE
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Sky aka Skylarren REMAKE
Name:Skylarren
Age:15
Ethnicity:White
Race: Human
Allegiance: Neutral
Origins: Human
Powers:slash/razor shurikens/Double pistols
Appearance: human
Strengths:Can Fly / can become Non Visible
Weaknesses:Corruption attacks
Personality:Happy / Funny / Mean / angryish/shy/
History:Used to work for dexter till the fusions took over now works as a hired gun to fight fusions and to kill The one and only Lord Fuse
Do you use nanos: Yes
Age:15
Ethnicity:White
Race: Human
Allegiance: Neutral
Origins: Human
Powers:slash/razor shurikens/Double pistols
Appearance: human
Strengths:Can Fly / can become Non Visible
Weaknesses:Corruption attacks
Personality:Happy / Funny / Mean / angryish/shy/
History:Used to work for dexter till the fusions took over now works as a hired gun to fight fusions and to kill The one and only Lord Fuse
Do you use nanos: Yes
Aserine- Posts : 3
Join date : 2017-07-22
Re: Sky aka Skylarren REMAKE
If sky is human, then she can't have powers, thus can't fly unless its from a device, this goes doubly for non-visible. Weapons do not count as powers at all.
For Appearance we want to know what she looks like, hair and eye color, height, clothing and more. Human tells us nothing really.
Everyone has a weakness to corruption attacks so its not something to have in the profile, plus you need 3 total weakness and strengths.
The history is too short and needs to tell us about their early child hood and what not. Fuse has not taken over anything so sky can still work for dexlabs.
Personality still needs to be expanded on big time. Happy and funny are too general, so explain them in more details
Also, from now on just edit the profile, do not start a new one please.
For Appearance we want to know what she looks like, hair and eye color, height, clothing and more. Human tells us nothing really.
Everyone has a weakness to corruption attacks so its not something to have in the profile, plus you need 3 total weakness and strengths.
The history is too short and needs to tell us about their early child hood and what not. Fuse has not taken over anything so sky can still work for dexlabs.
Personality still needs to be expanded on big time. Happy and funny are too general, so explain them in more details
Also, from now on just edit the profile, do not start a new one please.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
Join date : 2013-06-15
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