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Post  Inocente Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:18 pm

Name:Fernando Olaya
Age: 15 years old
Race: Human
Ethnicity Hispanic
Origin:Magic User

Appearance:Fernando is 6 feet and 2 inches tall, he has a pretty bulky body , has a dark skin complexion,vibrant purple eyes,Spiky blue hair, and has Bright white spots around his shoulders.

Attire: Fernando wears a purple/yellow hoodie , with some white/blue sneakers , and a purple armor pants.
How my char looks like:

Personality:Fernando is an all around nice guy , as he travels he offers to help random strangers with their troubles.But he is also smart and quick to think , if someone tries to use him , he'll notice instantly. Fernando also goes full on angry when someone harms his family or friends in any way or form, which can be an advantage to anyone who wishes to manipulate him.

Traits:
Positive traits:He's a caring figure, has  experience with Melee weapons thanks to him playing baseball, and He's a pretty good problem solver.

Negative traits: Easily aggravated, Often forgets things, and Can't perform underwater missions, due to light and electricity not working properly underwater.

Powers/Abilities:
Powers:

Strengths:
Academics: Fernando is a smart student, Passing at the top of his class and being a Senior at age 15.

Melee Expert: After Practicing Baseball and Kickboxing for years, he gained knowledge of Melee fighting and hand-to-hand fighting.

Mystical prowess : Since Fernando is a being filled with magic, he has knowledge about other mystical entities and some spells, such as Light manipulation.

Weaknesses:

Dark Magic/ Darkness: Fernando is vulnerable to Dark magic and the dark in general. Due to a period in his childhood where his city had a blackout and the absolute darkness terrified him, if it wasn't for him being with his family, he would've gone insane.His Light abilities are the opposite of darkness , so thats why the dark can harm him.

Hostility: Fernando doesn't like it when his family and friends argue or fight constantly   it makes him feel ill and in some cases nauseous.This is over him wanting for everyone to be at peace.

Vulnerable to telepathy:If a powerful telepath wanted to invade His mind, it would be pretty simple to do so, because when he was born, a minion of Aku secretly removed the telepathic block that he had , in order to avoid future worries.


History:In Colombia, where Fernando was born, there was a special tradition done in his family where the mother drinks the tree sap of the magic tree in order to insure that the child would be pure.When born 10 Spots would appear on each shoulder, the spots shined a pure white light after Fernando started crying, proving that he was pure.After spending his childhood in Colombia  he moved to the United States wit his parents ,he would return every  year for 3 months to visit his family during the summer or the winter. He Moved into Marquee Row , where he attended the school nearby. He shows prowess with baseball,Drums, and kickboxing.His powers awakened  the moment he was born, when he playfully put his hands around the moon, where the moons light overwhelmed him surrounding him with light. He obtained Electrokenises from an incident at the school that he goes to , where his powers suddenly went haywire and absorbed all of the electricity in the area. Fernando always kept his powers secret, not wanting to be in the same position as his old friend, Rex Salazar who is under constant supervision and not wanting to be Ben Tennyson, who he praises for keeping the world safe, but dislikes his bratty nature. When the Invasion started, Fernando took his parents and family to  Mt.Blackhead, under the protection of the Magic Tree. He usually stays in his house in Marquee Row or he would stay at Mt.Blackhead sometimes. He once tried to take on Planet Fuse head on, but retreated after being overwhelmed.

"Encounter" with Aku:Even though Aku was shattered/Imprisoned  by the time Fernando was born, his minions lived on. The day during the Tradition took place, a demon was scavenging the area and noticed the light coming from the Magic Tree. Disguising itself as a Squirrel, it sneaked in without  notice. As Fernando started glowing with white light. The Demon hopped on his head, removing the telepathic seal. This was so Aku wouldn't have many problems for if he were to return.

Encounter with Rex Salazar:He met Rex one day while he was going to the sunken mall, at the age of 10. they both literally bumped into each other and Rex activated his powers in front of him, out of hesitation, Fernando retaliated by starting an electrical charge. After that moment they both realize that they were similar and became friends. But Rex warned Fernando of keeping his powers secret, since agencies can be eyeing more often if he reveals his powers.

First encounter with Planet Fuse:Since Planet Fuse was in the Earth's sky, it was blocking a majority  of Fernando's connection to the moon, his main power source.He created light wings for the first time and flew as high as he could, Fernando was alert of how high he was going, since like other humans he can't breath in the vacuum of space. once in the perfect altitude, he started unleashing a barrage of Lightning and Concentrated white light towards the planet. it wasn't then until Fuse launched meteorites directly towards Fernando, launching him back to City station. It was then that he realized that he needed to join the war effort with his abilities.

Nanos: None


Last edited by Inocente on Sat Oct 03, 2015 11:13 pm; edited 11 times in total
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Post  Kaiser Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:34 pm

Personality should be expanded. He should have at least 3 positive traits and 3 negative traits.

You forgot his strengths and whether or not he uses nanos. Even if he doesn't, you still need to say no.

You mentioned one of his weaknesses was that he couldn't handle his family arguing.  Does his parents have a bad relationship? How did he meet Rex? Also, elaborate more on his attempt to attack Planet Fuse.
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Post  Inocente Sat Oct 03, 2015 12:18 am

Personality should be expanded. He should have at least 3 positive traits and 3 negative traits.

Positive traits:He's a caring figure, has  experience with Melee weapons thanks to him playing baseball, and He's a pretty good problem solver.

Negative traits: Easily aggravated, Often forgets things, and Can't perform underwater missions, due to light and electricity not working properly underwater.


You forgot his strengths and whether or not he uses nanos. Even if he doesn't, you still need to say no.

oops sorry about that, no he does not use nanos , he usually gives them to wandering heroes who don't have powers.

He has proficiency in Melee weapons, and hand-to-hand combat. He prefers not to use guns , since he can already launch projectiles.

You mentioned one of his weaknesses was that he couldn't handle his family arguing.  Does his parents have a bad relationship?

His parents  have a good relationship , it's just one of the downsides of his special procedure.
when he was born, his personality was altered a bit, making him pretty sensitive to disputes.

How did he meet Rex?

He met Rex one day while he was going to the sunken mall, at the age of 10. they both literally bumped into each other and Rex activated his powers in front of him, out of hesitation, Fernando retaliated by starting an electrical charge. After that moment they both realize that they were similar and became friends. But Rex warned Fernando of keeping his powers secret, since agencies can be eyeing more often if he reveals his powers.

Also, elaborate more on his attempt to attack Planet Fuse.

Since fuse was in the Earth's sky, it was blocking a majority  of Fernando's connection to the moon, his main power source.He created light wings for the first time, and flew to Planet Fuse. He started unleashing a barrage of Lightning and Concentrated white light towards the planet. it wasn't then until Fuse launched meteorites directly towards Fernando, launching him back to City station. It was then that he realized that he needed to join the war effort with his abilities.
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Post  Buttercrush Sat Oct 03, 2015 1:25 am

His race would just be human, and he would have Magic User origins.
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Post  Inocente Sat Oct 03, 2015 3:37 am

Edited my OC bio
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Post  Buttercrush Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:11 pm

He can't prefer his Powers to Nanos when he couldn't use Nanos if he wanted to. Magic Users are unable to have Nanos.

I bit iffy on having him fly to Fusion in his history. We'll see what another mod thinks of it.
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Post  Inocente Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:42 pm

Professor Utonium wrote:

I bit iffy on having him fly to Fusion in his history. We'll see what another mod thinks of it.

Oops again, I forgot to be more specific when I said that. He didn't fly into space or anything, Fernando just flew as high as he could and unleashed his attacks from there.Since he's human , he can't breath in the vacuum of space.
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Post  Buttercrush Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:49 pm

Alright, that makes a lot more sense. Edit that into your app and I'll approve!
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Post  Inocente Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:53 pm

Edited!
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Post  Kaiser Sat Oct 03, 2015 3:13 pm

Just add how he met Rex to the actual form and I'll approve.
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Post  Inocente Sat Oct 03, 2015 3:34 pm

Edited in the Rex encounter!
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace Sat Oct 03, 2015 5:53 pm

Inocente wrote:Place of Origin:Colombia

A.) This belongs in history.
B.) The Origin section is the origin of their power


Powers/Abilities:
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There can only be six attacks.

Vulnerable to telepathy:If a powerful telepath wanted to invade His mind, it would be pretty simple to do so, because when he was born, Aku secretly removed the telepathic block that he had , in order to avoid future worries.

What relationship does he have with Aku? Aku was released from his prison roughly a year ago RP time.
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Post  Inocente Sat Oct 03, 2015 11:14 pm

Edited the origin, history, powers and added the "aku" involvement"
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Post  Kaiser Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:30 pm

Approved. Two more and you can venture out to the full world or do a bootcamp if you feel you need help before starting if you're a beginner.
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Post  Inocente Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:22 pm

there's my first approval Very Happy
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Post  zerowing21 Tue Oct 06, 2015 3:45 pm

*stamps approved on forehead*
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace Tue Oct 06, 2015 5:33 pm

I'll give an approval.
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Post  Inocente Thu Oct 08, 2015 2:08 am

Uh sorry for not saying this earlier, bit Can Fernando have an apartment in Marquee Row/City station? in the history it says that he lives there
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace Thu Oct 08, 2015 4:23 am

It's been done. If you want the description to be changed, pm a moderator with the message you'd like it to say.
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