Nathan (Nate) May
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Nathan (Nate) May
Name: Nathan May
Age: 17
Ethnicity: African American
Race: Human
Allegiance: Good Guys
Origins: Magic
Power: Superspeed
Appearance: Brown skin, Yellow hair (Nathan's hairstyle [Imagine it yellow]), black eyes. Nate wears a sleeveless black hoodie with a yellow t-shirt under, black cargo shorts, and yellow running shoes. Nate has some muscle tone from working out, running and etc.
Strengths: Unpredictable, clever, adaptable, and has incredible endurance
Weaknesses: Somewhat troublesome. If Nate goes over his limits with his superspeed he could hurt himself, or worst, deadly. Nate is a sleeprunner. He can tend to zoom around the house or even outside and onto the streets. Also Nate and rain don't go together. Him going super fast plus wet grounds equal him being seriously hurt, so its best for him to be careful.
Personality: Nate is gracious when it comes to meeting new people. He does what he wants when he wants as long as it doesn't hurt people but if they're villains or what not, there's no telling what he could do. Whether hero or villain, you might catch onto Nate being a great guy to hang around, or some may think he's annoying, troublesome, etc, you name it. Nathan has the full capability to fight but doesn't like doing so unless really necessary.
History: Nathan was born with superspeed, a newfound power through Nathan's mothers side of the family of magic users. Nathan didn't know about his powers until later on explained towards the end. His parents were scientist who worked with Amps parents throughout the years. Amp and Nathan became close friends, causing trouble or what not and having all sorts of fun as the two grew up. Though when Amp caused a accident, ending up with his parents dying, Nathan's parents projects with them ended and also ended up moving away. Nathan was devistated that he had to move and wasn't able to see Amp. But soon after moving and settling in, Nates parents revealed to him that he has superspeed. Over the years he has learned to master his speed and know his limits. Currently Nate and his parents are moving to Pokey Oaks, and will be attending Peach Oaks when school starts.
Weapon: A ray gun
Nanos: No
Age: 17
Ethnicity: African American
Race: Human
Allegiance: Good Guys
Origins: Magic
Power: Superspeed
Appearance: Brown skin, Yellow hair (Nathan's hairstyle [Imagine it yellow]), black eyes. Nate wears a sleeveless black hoodie with a yellow t-shirt under, black cargo shorts, and yellow running shoes. Nate has some muscle tone from working out, running and etc.
Strengths: Unpredictable, clever, adaptable, and has incredible endurance
Weaknesses: Somewhat troublesome. If Nate goes over his limits with his superspeed he could hurt himself, or worst, deadly. Nate is a sleeprunner. He can tend to zoom around the house or even outside and onto the streets. Also Nate and rain don't go together. Him going super fast plus wet grounds equal him being seriously hurt, so its best for him to be careful.
Personality: Nate is gracious when it comes to meeting new people. He does what he wants when he wants as long as it doesn't hurt people but if they're villains or what not, there's no telling what he could do. Whether hero or villain, you might catch onto Nate being a great guy to hang around, or some may think he's annoying, troublesome, etc, you name it. Nathan has the full capability to fight but doesn't like doing so unless really necessary.
History: Nathan was born with superspeed, a newfound power through Nathan's mothers side of the family of magic users. Nathan didn't know about his powers until later on explained towards the end. His parents were scientist who worked with Amps parents throughout the years. Amp and Nathan became close friends, causing trouble or what not and having all sorts of fun as the two grew up. Though when Amp caused a accident, ending up with his parents dying, Nathan's parents projects with them ended and also ended up moving away. Nathan was devistated that he had to move and wasn't able to see Amp. But soon after moving and settling in, Nates parents revealed to him that he has superspeed. Over the years he has learned to master his speed and know his limits. Currently Nate and his parents are moving to Pokey Oaks, and will be attending Peach Oaks when school starts.
Weapon: A ray gun
Nanos: No
Last edited by Ryuga on Thu Jul 20, 2017 7:27 pm; edited 16 times in total
Ryuga- Posts : 2857
Join date : 2013-09-07
Re: Nathan (Nate) May
I can tell that this is a work in progress. I'll let you continue creating him before I'll make a full review.
techee- Posts : 904
Join date : 2013-06-16
Re: Nathan (Nate) May
I think it might be too similar to Amp.
Then again, I don't know exactly where you're going with it, and. I don't just wanna be a jerk and tell you to redo the whole thing for that reason, but it seems almost like a clone, down to the backstory.
Not sure what exactly I can ask you to do to "improve" it though...
Then again, I don't know exactly where you're going with it, and. I don't just wanna be a jerk and tell you to redo the whole thing for that reason, but it seems almost like a clone, down to the backstory.
Not sure what exactly I can ask you to do to "improve" it though...
Mr.Didathing- Posts : 1619
Join date : 2013-09-08
Re: Nathan (Nate) May
I actually forgot to post a little thingy about the similarities but I knew tweaking would be needed
Ryuga- Posts : 2857
Join date : 2013-09-07
Re: Nathan (Nate) May
I changed a huge portion if the history, tweaked the strengths (still could use more tweaking maybe), a few more weaknesses will be added in soon. I may also need to change the personality a tad bit as well.
Last edited by Ryuga on Wed Aug 06, 2014 11:24 pm; edited 2 times in total
Ryuga- Posts : 2857
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Re: Nathan (Nate) May
Ryuga wrote:Weaknesses: ...Nate also doesn't like rain.
That's a personality trait, not a weakness.
Re: Nathan (Nate) May
I might need to rephrase that. What I meant was that rain could be a weakness. Nate going super fast and rain don't go together and could end up seriously hurt if he isn't careful
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