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Post  Datasage Thu Feb 08, 2018 4:55 pm

Name: Aiden
Age:16
Ethnicity: Japanese
Race (If your OC is an alien): Human
Allegiance: Neutral
Origins: Human
Powers/Weapons:  

Complete Armament:  Aiden possesses a device on his right hand that looks like a stone wrist-band, but contains a pocket dimension of sorts. Inside this pocket dimension are thousands of swords, spears, axes, maces, bows and arrows, and a lot of other weapons, including modern ones for his own use. His ability allows him to draw out one to two of them at a time and use them. Complete Arsenal has weapons he cannot control inside it as well. His arsenal includes technological replicas of swords like the one Jack uses or similar weapons. This is coded to him. It also has another capability, namely that it can summon multiple weapons that he can shoot off like missiles at opponents, sometimes 2-3, or 10-15, or so on, depending on the need.

The Goggles: A set of goggles that came with the Wristband. These improve his vision and prevent any vision problems. They can also plot trajectories, and access the internet, and act as a smart phone. Aiden is only aware that they help him avoid any vision problems whatsoever. These goggles also have another secret to them should he be in a truly dangerous situation. These have a list of all the weapons, and what they are capable of encoded inside them. Of course discovering that feature will take a while as will any of the features. These have an AI inside of them that chooses what weapon he gets from the Complete Arsenal, even if it appears to be random.



Appearance:

Aiden's height is about 5"2. His body is light, not overly muscular, but not overly fat either. If anything he appears to be a bit scrawny. His skin is pale white, almost silver in color, making him an albino. His hair is raven black, and his eyes are scarlet. Clothing wise, Aiden prefers to dress in a black Gi like that of a Ninja most of the time, but when he must change clothes, he prefers if he must wear other colors, gold with black trim, a leather jacket, black jeans, black and gold trimmed boots, and black fingerless gloves. A set of goggles is also worn by him. Typically he keeps a sword strapped across his back, in case he should need it. His hair is frequently dyed black by him so he does not look like a monster in his eyes. Aiden is constantly wearing goggles over his eyes, because of his albinism.



Strengths:  

Not a Hero: Unlike a hero, Aiden is willing to murder his opponents if he deems it needed, and  as such does not have the same restraint. To him, it is considered a strength.

Fighting Dirty: When it comes to a fight, there is no tactic that Aiden will consider forbidden but he will use every dirty trick, and then some to make sure he wins.

Practically Minded: Aiden is practically minded, and willing to do whatever it takes to accomplish a job, so long as he deems the action practical.



Weaknesses:  

Concentration:  It takes Aiden a lot of focus to summon a single weapon, and so he has to concentrate on doing so, otherwise, he could end up summoning 2-6 weapons.

Energy Burn: Using his ability to draw weapons out of the hammer space takes a lot out of  Aiden which is why he must eat a lot more than what a normal person would.

They’re Only Imitations:  His weapons are only imitations, made out of advanced Future Tech that should not have existed back then,  meaning that they could be broken by the originals of whatever they are, rather ridiculously easily.

Control: Sometimes the weapons he chooses out of the Hammer space could be too powerful for him, and he’d lose control of them.

Lack of Experience: Due to his lack of experience with the device the weapons sometimes are random. Typically this has a 80:20 with the bulk being random.

Battery: Another weakness is that he is the battery for any powers or capabilities his weapons have.




Personality:  Aiden is an individual who does not believe in fighting opponents honorably, but believes in doing whatever it takes to win against an opponent. Aiden is willing to show mercy provided people are deemed worthy of mercy by him. Most people are not deemed worthy of his compassion though, especially if they are villains, or villainous at all. Aiden is also willing to align himself with heroes, and villains to get the job done, though he would not work with the likes of Fuse, or Aku, because of his personal code. Aiden is not afraid to take lives of organic beings provided he deems them needing to be killed by him. Aiden is not a hero, and knows he’s not worthy of that title.

He also knows he’s only allowed such power to be a backup plan in case Jack fails to slay Aku. Aiden has a care for life, even if he would not admit it. The trip through time has also made Aiden more willing to look out for only number #1, himself. Aiden hates Fuse, however, and does not like the fact that that villain has added to his to do list. Aiden is also a person who will not let other people cook for him. If he does not cook the food himself, he will not allow himself to eat it, for some reason. Aiden believes Jack to be lazy as he has not killed Aku yet. Aiden also loves to do art. He also loves to cook for people.

Aiden really hates Fuse for adding more work to his schedule. He also hates most of the heroes as he believes them to be lazy. Most of the villains are distrusted by Aiden as well. Time travel kinda irritates him. Aiden wants to one day pay off his debts and also put a blade through the head of Fuse and the rest of his enemies. Aiden is also determined to solve his problems. Part of Aiden wants to return home, but he really doesn't care to hunt down the random individual who made the trap. Still, he has determined that he is going to take care of Aku by putting a technological replica of Jack's blade through his chest, and a few million spears, as well. Aiden also plans on doing that to Fuse as well because of how annoying Fuse and the others are to him.

When Aiden finds out that Jack is "chill" with Aku, it will likely cause him to believe Jack has lost his mind, and make him try to murder Jack. Aiden is a bit scared of Fuse and the Fusions, but for him, that fear has turned to another emotion. Hatred. He hates them because they are evil, and must be dealt with. Aiden would rather exterminate all the Fusions, and Fuse than try to befriend them or anything.

The culture shock of the world will confuse Aiden, and make him have a difficult time adapting to the place. However, at the same time, it will also provide a challenge for him to overcome, something that Aiden loves to do.

Aiden does not idolize Jack, but views him as an opponent, one to be overcome.

History:  

Before his journey began,  Aiden was homeless. Given his parents had died of disease and he had no one to care for him, Aiden was desperate to do anything. When the threat of Aku first arrived, the villagers thought of sending Aiden instead because he was not royalty, but they held off on that. Aiden was the son of a retired Shinobi who lived in the village, but who had died of disease, along with his mother. This was a secret that the villagers kept from the Royal Family.

When Jack didn’t return the villagers decided they would send Aiden out on a mission to get a power that could allow him to survive against Aku, and maybe even prevail. The Villagers then were visited by a traveling Merchant who offered them a deal. He’d supply a map to a place where Aiden could go to get the required abilities for himself that would allow him to survive facing Aku, and many similar evils. In return, Aiden would owe him a favor to be paid at a time of the merchant’s choosing. The deal was made, though Aiden was unaware such a bargain had been made about his life.

Aiden’s journey began, much the same as the journey of Samurai Jack had been. When he eventually arrived in the area where the Weapon King - Complete Arsenal was kept. What Aiden didn't know was that it was booby trapped.The trap flung him to the year 2050. He's only arrived a few minutes ago in the present, and now has to cope with all the changes that the future brings.


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Post  zerowing21 Fri Feb 09, 2018 11:15 am

Having control of so many elements is a bit too much to me, if it was say one or two then it would be fine.
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Post  Datasage Fri Feb 09, 2018 11:31 am

Removed the Elemental Abilities entirely, for now.
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Post  Buttercrush Fri Feb 09, 2018 11:42 am

Datasage wrote:Elemental Manipulation:  Aiden can manipulate Fire, Earth, Electricity, Water, Air, and several other elements by channeling them through the weapons that he has at his disposal, allowing him to provide the weapons varying powers. Really though, this is a side-effect of the Complete Armament being on him. In time he could progress to the point where he could manipulate the elements without having to have a weapon.

While I enjoy the use of elemental powers, usage of all elements is too much for the RP. We'd rather you pick a single element for Aiden to harness instead of multiple.

Datasage wrote:Appearance:
His skin is pale white, almost silver in color, making him an albino. His hair is raven black, and his eyes are scarlet.

Albinism affects the pigment of skin, eyes, and hair, which means dark, black hair is very out of place. An easy fix to this would be to say that Aiden frequently dyes his hair dark.

Those with albinism usually have some to many vision problems due to the way their bodies developed. Does Aiden suffer from vision problems as well, and if not, what's the logical explanation as to why not?

Datasage wrote:Lack of Experience: Due to his lack of experience with the device the weapons sometimes are random. Typically this has a 80:20 with the bulk being random. In boss battles the randomness is not an issue though. What he does not know is that this always gives him what he needs.

This isn't a video game, so the definition of a "boss battle" can be very different depending on the situation. Perhaps it would be best to just remove this sentence and keep the randomness as a constant.

Datasage wrote:He also knows he’s only allowed such power to be a backup plan in case Jack fails to slay Aku.

What does Aiden think of Jack? Is he an idol to him, or rather an enemy? Also, how does Aiden react to Jack and Aku semi-getting along in order to defeat Fuse? Perhaps he just doesn't know of their temporary alliance yet?

Datasage wrote:Aiden hates Fuse, however, and does not like the fact that that villain has added to his to do list.

Aiden is from the past, so being rocketed into the thick of a long war against literal aliens is probably a massive shock. Besides just hating him for adding to his schedule, what does Aiden think of Fuse and the Fusions as well? Is he sacred? Unbothered? Indifferent...?

Datasage wrote:When the threat of Aku first arrived, the villagers thought of sending Aiden instead because he was not royalty, but they held off on that. When Jack didn’t return the villagers decided they would send Aiden out on a mission to get a power that could allow him to survive against Aku, and maybe even prevail.

Why was Aiden the one to be picked for this responsibility? What made him so special that an entire village believed he could save them?

Datasage wrote:What Aiden didn't know was that it was booby trapped.The trap flung him to the year 2049.When he arrived he started using the Alias of Aiden.

Being flung thousands of years into the future is probably a mad culture shock for Aiden. How does he react to his new world? What does he think of there now being aliens walking among them, as well as those with superpowers?

Or perhaps you plan to start RPing the exact moment he arrives? That would be very interesting to see.
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Post  Datasage Fri Feb 09, 2018 11:57 am

He's going to have just arrived. I believe I've met all the edits you wanted. I also added the goggles as a solution to the vision problem Aiden has.
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Post  Buttercrush Fri Feb 09, 2018 12:09 pm

With these edits, I'll stamp a tentative approval onto Aiden. You'll need two more approvals to begin RPing. Smile
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Post  zerowing21 Fri Feb 09, 2018 3:40 pm

The first four strengths can you explains why they are strengths?
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Post  Datasage Fri Feb 09, 2018 3:59 pm

They are strengths, because they relate to non power abilities that he has, meaning that he is exceptionally good at those things.
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Post  zerowing21 Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:07 pm

But why is he good at them? I wish for more information. Like free running mater and master acrobat, could be combined into Parkour master since they do intersect into the same thing.
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Post  Datasage Fri Feb 09, 2018 5:39 pm

Edits have been made, to make him more acceptable I hope.
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace Fri Feb 09, 2018 9:15 pm

I'll give a stamp of approval.
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Post  Datasage Fri Feb 09, 2018 9:29 pm

So excited to play Aiden. This is going to be fun!

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Post  zerowing21 Fri Feb 09, 2018 9:36 pm

*stamps approval on forehead.*
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