Peace's boot camp.
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Peace's boot camp.
This is where we'll train your skill to help you learn how to rp Peace.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
Join date : 2013-06-15
Re: Peace's boot camp.
well what exactly do you need help with for an rping aspect, we can start there and go on as I notice things.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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Re: Peace's boot camp.
Hmm well, I'd need a basic demonstration of the entire process.
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: Peace's boot camp.
Alright one basic post for ya coming up.
Wanting to enjoy her day off from her teaching job, Bubbles Utonium walks slowly past the shops at the mall, thinking about if she should go clothes shopping or buy something special for her family to eat for dinner. She stops at one point and taps her foot gently, crossing her arms to think.
Now this is where you interact with your character.
Wanting to enjoy her day off from her teaching job, Bubbles Utonium walks slowly past the shops at the mall, thinking about if she should go clothes shopping or buy something special for her family to eat for dinner. She stops at one point and taps her foot gently, crossing her arms to think.
Now this is where you interact with your character.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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Re: Peace's boot camp.
Peace noticed Bubbles and ran toward her
"Hey Bubbles, what are you up to today?"
"Hey Bubbles, what are you up to today?"
Last edited by Peace Kwest on Tue Apr 25, 2017 11:36 am; edited 1 time in total
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: Peace's boot camp.
You failed to read the name correctly. Please try again.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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Re: Peace's boot camp.
. Error .
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Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: Peace's boot camp.
(For all purposes of the boot, when I say please try again, you have to edit your post or do a new one. Should have explained that. You're response as is, isn't something I'd accept in a boot camp, if it was in the normal rp and meant to be for comedic purposes, I would.)
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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Re: Peace's boot camp.
"Hello!" Bubbles chirps happily to Peace with a smile, "I'm debating on what to make tonight for Ana and Holdie. What about you?"
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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"Thought I would go here and buy some tools to take care of my arm" Peace said, smiling as well.
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
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"Is something the matter with it?" Bubbles asks, looking at the robotic arm.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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"Energy core leaks out of everywhere; don't know if it's dangerous or not though" Peace said, looking at his arm as well
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
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"Maybe you need to go see The Professor." Bubbles suggests, not really understanding the tech behind the arm. "I'm sure he can figure out if it was dangerous or not."
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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"Didn't think of that until now, I will go to him. Thanks" Peace said. He waved Bubbles goodbye as he ran off the mall.
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: Peace's boot camp.
"See you later Peace." The girl shouts and turns to think about what to get her family.
(You might want to rethink how you structured that last sentence. Words are slightly out of order. Waved Goodbye to bubbles would sound better and you missed a word since it allows to make more sense. Ran off from the mall. No need to redo it, so let's continue)
(You might want to rethink how you structured that last sentence. Words are slightly out of order. Waved Goodbye to bubbles would sound better and you missed a word since it allows to make more sense. Ran off from the mall. No need to redo it, so let's continue)
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
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