The boy named Peace
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The boy named Peace
Created a new thread for a fresh start, sorry
Name: Peace
Age: 17
Appearance:
http://fusionfaller4.deviantart.com/art/Peace-3-from-Gurb-614027148
Ethnicity: Israel
Allegiance: Good Guys; associated with the Urban Rangers as their delivery boy.
Origins: Cyborg
Powers: The Cybernetic arm he got upgrades his strength significantly specifically for his arm, the power core inside the arm gives the hand enough "energy" to lift heavy objects.
The Cybernetic arm is consistent of two main features; The melee mode and the fire mode. Now the fire mode is a regular energy rifle that takes energy from the power core, so Peace is very judgmental to when he should use the fire mode and when he should not. The melee mode is just the mechanic metal shaped in a form of a slightly overweight arm that gives Peace extra strength in hand to hand combat.
Strengths:
Makes a good use of the environment to his desires in combat, he is a very agility and flexible soldier, when it comes to battles he can easily study the ground before he attacks. He uses his talky personality to annoy the opponent and to often have the upper hand when it comes to temper management, to cause the opponent to do a mistake.
Although he prefers melee use of his arm he make use of the enormous energy blast that provided with his fire mode of the arm.
Weaknesses:
His naive nature gets in his way too often; he is easily manipulated by others, although his flexibility the metal hand takes from his skills from the arm’s weight. The boy is also ignorant sometimes to the situation by daydreaming. It happens to him a lot and usually takes him awhile to enter combat.
Personality:
In one word: Nonsensical. The naive boy usually tries to charm up any event he stumbles upon, but because of his lack of understanding socialism he often fails badly and have a reputation of an annoyance. Although all he is light-hearted and usually comes with a big smile on his face, a freakish looking smile at times.
In certain times his behavior gets a bit unstable after an adrenalin boost. Making his action unwary mid battle. He is also shown to daydream often which gets in his daily life a lot.
Sometimes he can get too aggressive towards a failure, although understandable, he is over-reacting at times. Some say Peace's relationship with fusion monsters has grown bigger than his relationship with other human beens, he chats a lot while in combat and has opened more to his enemies than his comrades.
As the Passionate he is, sometimes he is too focused on his task that he completely forgets his surroundings.
History:
Found at birth by Samurai Jack at the darkest parts of the Darklands pre-fusion war the boy has not got any information about his parents, the Samurai took care for the baby for a few years, amazed by his peaceful attitude towards the dangers the world has to offer, the samurai has gifted him the name “Peace”. The name has stuck.
Although the young baby did not had a father before, he wouldn't reconsider Jack as his father but more an a mentor figure, for the sayings Jack shared with him about the constant fight between good and evil made Peace question the world from a very early age.
A few year passed, in them the samurai had to train Peace basic survival skills in the unknown wilds of the Darklands, such as making fire, hunting, guidance through the stars and tools management. By the age of 9 Peace was targeted by the KND as an optional soldier for them, they came to him with an offer to join their routes but he declined, fearing their technical advancements. Instead he followed around the Urban Rangers, which he felt more open and safe with them as being scouts and not a fighting force like the KND.
A few years passed, Peace was at the age of 15 when the Fusion war burst. He wanted to go to the Darklands and help his mentor, but after the Urban Rangers stated that they won’t send him there he quitted their routes and traveled to the farthest land a 15 years old childish Urban Rangers could have travel to at this point. Goat Junkyard.
Peace went completely lost up to that point, not knowing where to head and what to do he started camping in the junkyard, studying the fusions around him to expand his survival skills now in this new way of life he was forced into.
So he did, trapping fusions and testing them; Edd witness some of his skills, although the grown hatred that the Urban Rangers have to Peace these days he took his as an asset in Fusion-Studying program, since then Peace is mostly toying with the fusions, chilling with Coop whom cared for Peace while in his time at the junkyard and doing delivery jobs for Edd.
In the age of 16, after some unfortunate fight Peace had with Bad Max he entered a coma for a month. While in coma he had a vision of an adventurer who says he is Peace’s father, he requests Peace to find Peace’s mother.
When Peace woke up he found out that he had lost his right arm and a few of his brain cells, so DexLab built him the arm to help him manage his daily doings as a soldier at this world.
Now, at the age of 17, he detriment to find his biological mother by all means.
Name: Peace
Age: 17
Appearance:
http://fusionfaller4.deviantart.com/art/Peace-3-from-Gurb-614027148
Ethnicity: Israel
Allegiance: Good Guys; associated with the Urban Rangers as their delivery boy.
Origins: Cyborg
Powers: The Cybernetic arm he got upgrades his strength significantly specifically for his arm, the power core inside the arm gives the hand enough "energy" to lift heavy objects.
The Cybernetic arm is consistent of two main features; The melee mode and the fire mode. Now the fire mode is a regular energy rifle that takes energy from the power core, so Peace is very judgmental to when he should use the fire mode and when he should not. The melee mode is just the mechanic metal shaped in a form of a slightly overweight arm that gives Peace extra strength in hand to hand combat.
Strengths:
Makes a good use of the environment to his desires in combat, he is a very agility and flexible soldier, when it comes to battles he can easily study the ground before he attacks. He uses his talky personality to annoy the opponent and to often have the upper hand when it comes to temper management, to cause the opponent to do a mistake.
Although he prefers melee use of his arm he make use of the enormous energy blast that provided with his fire mode of the arm.
Weaknesses:
His naive nature gets in his way too often; he is easily manipulated by others, although his flexibility the metal hand takes from his skills from the arm’s weight. The boy is also ignorant sometimes to the situation by daydreaming. It happens to him a lot and usually takes him awhile to enter combat.
Personality:
In one word: Nonsensical. The naive boy usually tries to charm up any event he stumbles upon, but because of his lack of understanding socialism he often fails badly and have a reputation of an annoyance. Although all he is light-hearted and usually comes with a big smile on his face, a freakish looking smile at times.
In certain times his behavior gets a bit unstable after an adrenalin boost. Making his action unwary mid battle. He is also shown to daydream often which gets in his daily life a lot.
Sometimes he can get too aggressive towards a failure, although understandable, he is over-reacting at times. Some say Peace's relationship with fusion monsters has grown bigger than his relationship with other human beens, he chats a lot while in combat and has opened more to his enemies than his comrades.
As the Passionate he is, sometimes he is too focused on his task that he completely forgets his surroundings.
History:
Found at birth by Samurai Jack at the darkest parts of the Darklands pre-fusion war the boy has not got any information about his parents, the Samurai took care for the baby for a few years, amazed by his peaceful attitude towards the dangers the world has to offer, the samurai has gifted him the name “Peace”. The name has stuck.
Although the young baby did not had a father before, he wouldn't reconsider Jack as his father but more an a mentor figure, for the sayings Jack shared with him about the constant fight between good and evil made Peace question the world from a very early age.
A few year passed, in them the samurai had to train Peace basic survival skills in the unknown wilds of the Darklands, such as making fire, hunting, guidance through the stars and tools management. By the age of 9 Peace was targeted by the KND as an optional soldier for them, they came to him with an offer to join their routes but he declined, fearing their technical advancements. Instead he followed around the Urban Rangers, which he felt more open and safe with them as being scouts and not a fighting force like the KND.
A few years passed, Peace was at the age of 15 when the Fusion war burst. He wanted to go to the Darklands and help his mentor, but after the Urban Rangers stated that they won’t send him there he quitted their routes and traveled to the farthest land a 15 years old childish Urban Rangers could have travel to at this point. Goat Junkyard.
Peace went completely lost up to that point, not knowing where to head and what to do he started camping in the junkyard, studying the fusions around him to expand his survival skills now in this new way of life he was forced into.
So he did, trapping fusions and testing them; Edd witness some of his skills, although the grown hatred that the Urban Rangers have to Peace these days he took his as an asset in Fusion-Studying program, since then Peace is mostly toying with the fusions, chilling with Coop whom cared for Peace while in his time at the junkyard and doing delivery jobs for Edd.
In the age of 16, after some unfortunate fight Peace had with Bad Max he entered a coma for a month. While in coma he had a vision of an adventurer who says he is Peace’s father, he requests Peace to find Peace’s mother.
When Peace woke up he found out that he had lost his right arm and a few of his brain cells, so DexLab built him the arm to help him manage his daily doings as a soldier at this world.
Now, at the age of 17, he detriment to find his biological mother by all means.
Last edited by Peace Kwest on Sun Mar 12, 2017 5:16 pm; edited 4 times in total
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: The boy named Peace
Ethnicity is not human, it's where he's ancestors hailed from. So if they came from England, he's be english.
If you use Ethnicity, you do not need race either.
For the Naive weakness, how does it get in his way, you have to explain it more please. You also need a third weakness.
Personality needs to be expanded on, you need some negative traits and at least one more positive.
If you use Ethnicity, you do not need race either.
For the Naive weakness, how does it get in his way, you have to explain it more please. You also need a third weakness.
Personality needs to be expanded on, you need some negative traits and at least one more positive.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
Join date : 2013-06-15
Re: The boy named Peace
Peace Kwest wrote:Powers: The cyborg arm he got upgrades his strength significantly.
The cyborg arm is consistent of two main features; The melee mode and the fire mode. Now the fire mode is a regular energy rifle that takes energy from the power core, so Peace is very judgmental to when he should use the fire mode and when he should not. The melee mode is just the mechanic metal shaped in a form of a slightly overweight arm that gives Peace extra strength in hand to hand combat.
*Cybernetic arm
How does it upgrade his strength? Is it a whole body thing, or just specifically in his arm?
Weaknesses:
His naive nature gets in his way too often, although his flexibility the metal hand takes from his skills from the arm’s weight.
Add in another weakness.
Re: The boy named Peace
Well I gave him Israeli routes, explained a bit the weakness (Tell me if it isn't enough)zerowing21 wrote:Ethnicity is not human, it's where he's ancestors hailed from. So if they came from England, he's be english.
If you use Ethnicity, you do not need race either.
For the Naive weakness, how does it get in his way, you have to explain it more please. You also need a third weakness.
Personality needs to be expanded on, you need some negative traits and at least one more positive.
And pointed out he is passionate, aggressive, daydreaming and focused on himself sometimes.
And I have explained more about the strength boost
Thanks for the help.
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: The boy named Peace
So what now? Do I wait for something...?
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: The boy named Peace
You say say Israli, you do not put routes. Heck even Routes is the wrong word to use in this case, but that's not important.
Also, pre fusion war, the urban rangers are just normal scouts of sorts from the cul-de-sac not some big fighting group.
Also, pre fusion war, the urban rangers are just normal scouts of sorts from the cul-de-sac not some big fighting group.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
Join date : 2013-06-15
Re: The boy named Peace
zerowing21 wrote:You say say Israli, you do not put routes. Heck even Routes is the wrong word to use in this case, but that's not important.
Also, pre fusion war, the urban rangers are just normal scouts of sorts from the cul-de-sac not some big fighting group.
Sure, if you couldn't tell I am not a native English speaker so phrases like "Israeli routes" seems natural for me.
Thanks again.
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
Re: The boy named Peace
The rp has been in full swing for 4 years. The war was in full swing a year or two before then. So this means you will have to do some age changes. Please see the timeline in required reading.
zerowing21- Posts : 7958
Join date : 2013-06-15
Re: The boy named Peace
Done.zerowing21 wrote:The rp has been in full swing for 4 years. The war was in full swing a year or two before then. So this means you will have to do some age changes. Please see the timeline in required reading.
I hope.
Peace Kwest- Posts : 23
Join date : 2016-08-05
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